Read excerpts from the winners of Blizzard's writing contest

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6-06-2009 @ 1:16AM

Sean Riley said...

"I have to say, aside from the overuse of adjectives and adverbs that tends to be endemic to fan fiction (write with nouns and verbs, people), this is some pretty enjoyable writing."

To be fair, my over-use of adjectives and adverbs in The Last Days of Crank Fizzlepop was to establish a character. First person narrative can change the rules.

6-06-2009 @ 1:18AM

Sean Riley said...

I lost the start of that pose. I began it by brandishing my copy of the Elements of Style. Avoid unnecessary words, I know, I know.

6-06-2009 @ 1:21AM

Sean Riley said...

Start of that POST. God, I'm distracted today.

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