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6-22-2009 @ 7:17PM
It's my opinion that the voices weren't done very well. I don't know if disagreeing with you doesn't make sense, but hopefully you can live with it.
6-22-2009 @ 7:49PM
Since you are being honest, could you please tell me in what way my demo sucks or the voices suck? If anything you'd be helping me get better.
6-22-2009 @ 8:15PM
I'm not saying your efforts suck. You put some energy into them. A lot videos do suck in that the voices fall flat. All I'm saying is that, with my critic's hat on, I wasn't impressed. All that means is that it didn't hook me.I think the inflection is good on some of the pieces, if a bit over stylized. The big thing for myself was that all the voices sound like you doing voices, if that makes sense. I think your main weakness is your voice sounds young. The orc voices didn't come across as being orc voices. I understand that orcs could have a range, but it sounds like an orc doing an orc impression in that case. The humans sounded like they were doing impersonations as well. If I were to sum it up in one sentence, it would be that it seems as if you're trying too hard, and that comes across.I know I don't put anything out so I can't say I know the market/audience, but those were my impressions. I'm just one person, though, so whatever.
6-22-2009 @ 8:26PM
Thanks man. I will certainly focus more on hooking the viewer next time. i think part of it is that this is on a WoW site...and only 2 1/2 clips are WoW stuff. Maybe that lost your interest?i don't know...Needless to say, when i get around to making a second demo i will keep your comments in mind.
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