WoW.com Guest Post: Creating lore-based characters that aren't Mary Sues

One of the most frequent criticisms leveled at any kind of roleplay or fan-written fiction is the presence of the dreaded Mary Sue.
If you're not familiar with the term, a Mary Sue is a character who is overly idealized, has few or no actual flaws and functions as a wish-fulfillment or fantasy for the author. In WoW, this type of character is also frequently tied to major lore figures – the stereotypical lovechild of Thrall and Jaina (or some other such invented tie to a major character).
Unfortunately, sometimes this turns into an avoidance of all lore information in an attempt to not make the character Sue-ish. In a world like Azeroth that has a lot of really well developed lore, that can result in characters who are dangerously ambiguous and don't have any connection or history.
So how do you write a lore-based character without toeing the Mary Sue line?
First – Tie the character to places or events instead of people.
Blizzard has been pretty specific with us about their major lore characters. Sure there are holes, but between the games, the quests, the website, the books, the RPGs, and all the other various lore sources out there, it's hard to make an argument that your character is the twin brother of Cairne that nobody's ever heard of before.
However, it's pretty easy to see how your character might have served in one or another of the armies during the assault on Hyjal. Blizzard hasn't told us the names of all of (or even many of) the Sentinels, so it would make sense that a female night elf might have been a Sentinel in that assault, even if nobody's ever heard of her before.
You can tie your characters to really amazing events without making a bid at someone "famous" just to make them sound more important. (It's the equivalent of claiming you're a movie star that nobody's ever heard of – other people are likely to not believe you or think you're delusional.)
The lore says the past has happened in such and such a way. The orcs came to Azeroth through the Dark Portal, and Grom Hellscream sacrificed himself to rid them of the bloodlust and demonic dependence. But it doesn't say how an individual orc would respond to such an event. There is no official "all elves responded by doing such-and-such" explanation for what happened after the world tree was destroyed. Simply put, the official story gives us all a place to start, and we build our characters from there.
A well built character doesn't need fame to be fun to roleplay.
They simply need a history – connection to the world of Azeroth – so that they fit in. The major events that happened to Azeroth are things that would affect many people. Using those events and asking "How did my character react to that" is a great way to deepen his or her personality at the same time that you create a tie to the world.
Second – Make sure the character can stand on his/her own.
Using the lore to help ground your character in Azeroth isn't the same thing as using the lore as an excuse to not actually build an interesting character. If the only thing your character has going for her is the fact that she's Uther's long lost lover, she won't be that interesting.
Giving a character a personality is way more important than giving them an important sounding name or a really elaborate backstory. Regardless of who someone knows or what someone's done, if they're boring, nobody is going to want to spend a lot of time around them.
How do you do create an interesting character? Look into their personality. Are they friendly? Unfriendly? How do they react to new people? Do they have any unusual mannerisms or quirks? What makes them strong? What makes them weak? What are they afraid of?
Dimensional characters need both flaws and strengths, things that make them awesome and things make them not-so-awesome. Maybe your character is terrified of spiders or snakes. Maybe he isn't very physically strong, and needs help doing things that require brute force, but he is really smart and knows a lot about magic. Maybe your character is incredibly devoted to another person, a religion, or a faction and it gets in his way when she tries to do things that might contradict that.
Keeping a balance is a great way to get a character started without falling too much into the Sue-trap, and it forces you to think about them as more than just a pixelated and idealized "perfect winner in all things" (the classic trademark of a Mary Sue).
Third – Don't use the lore as a weapon.
Perhaps the most important step in this process is what happens once your character is actually fleshed out, and you step into a roleplaying situation.
The lore is there to give background to a character, not to be a way to prove that your character is stronger, better, prettier, and more awesome than everyone else, whether you're RPing in your head as you tackle a new and scary boss in a raid, on paper or in a forum when you write up a story, or in a conversational situation with other characters.
Using the lore to cut through other people's characters and stories - "Jennia the mage is Jaina's long-lost little sister and she's an awesome mage so she just blasts away all the bad guys, the end!"- is both rude and kind of annoying. Sure it's fun to play an all-powerful character, but if you had a story you were trying to write, or an event that your character was trying to participate in, having someone else walk up and go "POOF! It's all better 'cause I'm awesome" kind of ruins the story.
That doesn't mean your character can't be awesome – every character needs at least one or two little awesome traits and abilities – it means to use those in conjunction with others.
Working together on an event, raid boss, instance, quest, or story is when roleplay shines. Characters working together allow roleplayers to deepen their stories, learn more about their characters, and enjoy the "RPG" part of WoW a lot more than when they're simply by themselves.
So there you have it. Three things to help you build characters that are strong in Warcraft lore without turning them into Mary Sues.
Whether you never really think about roleplay, occasionally think about your character as an independent individual, or put time into developing, writing about, and gaming as that character, roleplaying is a pretty integral part of WoW. There's a lot of really amazing history and a lot of opportunities to play interesting, fun, and dynamic characters in Azeroth.
Have fun, be creative, and look through your character's eyes once in awhile – you'll probably like what you see.
-Anna
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Reader Comments (Page 3 of 4)
brian Apr 9th 2010 1:02PM
Hearing this, it would be awesome to subvert it. "I'm a dragon!" "No you're not." "I know, I just wish I was :("
The character who wishes they were a dragon. That probably wouldn't be too far off either, given the fact that many races have seen the evident power of dragons.
Dreadskull Apr 9th 2010 9:56AM
I love how Rhonin's picture is used for the header of this article.
Asswipe Johnson Apr 9th 2010 10:19AM
That's what makes King Wrynn and Garrosh Hellscream great. Not only are they major characters who are difficult to even LIKE, they're our FACTION LEADERS.
Spiff Apr 9th 2010 10:35AM
I really don't get why people hate Wrynn so much; sure he's a prick but so is Garrosh and the majority of NPC's you encounter ingame that give you quests; he hates orcs, mainly because of the fact that he was enslaved and forced to fight in an arena team for their pleasure and still he can show a "good side" (TOC event, ICC Saurfang event, etc) while still being, for all purposes, a prick.
Thrall, now there's a two dimensional character; he's good, supposedly shows no flaws of behaviour or judgement, and just stands there being "good", Garrosh at least showed a weaker side back in Nagrand and then a descent into aggression and arrogance in Northrend but he evolved, Thrall is the same since beta...
Bronwyn Apr 9th 2010 11:39AM
Yeah but Thrall puts up with Garrosh, there's a flaw right there.
mariodcole Apr 9th 2010 12:06PM
And Sylvanus, the end of the Wrathgate series shows he feels like a failure
BadAndyMk3 Apr 9th 2010 10:38AM
Yeah, but by the time WoW came out, Thrall's story was pretty much told. Which is why they're packing him up to be the Gaurdian or something.
beaglesan Apr 9th 2010 10:45AM
A few years back, I wrote some fanfiction about a moderately popular anime of the comedy/drama harem variety, one where the hero is surrounded by powerful girls, and he turns out to be powerful himself. Needless to say, Mary Sues abounded in fanfiction about this series, which is always a danger with author created characters. So what did I do? I made my character a beagle. One who had vague memories of having been human, had human intelligence, but full beagle instincts. In short, no powers or strengths beyond what a human intelligence in a medium-sized dog's body could bring to the game. I set up this character that way so as to be able to witness things going on without interfering with the main characters' actions, to witness, without intruding, yet still have my character in the center of the action.
The same thing applies to having your toon interact with lore: Don't try to be part of the lore any more than your assigned role as a player; as a player, don't try to have your toon be a player in the lore of the game...if you want to do that, stay in one spot with an "!" over your head. Your character can have interacted with lore NPCs, but do so in ways that are minor, which make clear that you know who the true stars of the game are for lore.
Some helpful hints if you want to have your character to have witnessed lore:
1) Your character, at the earliest, started off as level 1, 5 years after the defeat of the Scourge. Therefore, your character should have been no more than that level for any events prior to that time...unless you're a Death Knight. Want to have been at Mt. Hyjal? Okay. You weren't a general or marshal, you were a messanger...someone Jaina or Thrall might remember, but not as a fellow hero.
2) Use your professions as links to lore characters. Tirion and you both share the same fishing hole...and he keeps snagging the best fish. You were part of a team of herbalists Jaina gathered to provide mats for elixers and flasks at Mt. Hyjal. You mined the mats for the lousy armor Thrall wears. You were the blacksmith commissioned to make Varian's armor upon his return.
3) Flaws and character traits to diminish lore impact. You made Varian's armor, but there was a dispute over the fee. You were a messanger at Mt. Hyjal, but whenever called to deliver a message, you were always distracted by a) some other minor personage you were flirting with; b) munching on the cheese supplies c) off fishing; d) etc.
Remember, your character has a starring role, that set for players in the game, you don't need to try to be the star of everything.
Fletcher Apr 9th 2010 11:37AM
I'm not on an RP server, but I like to get an idea of my characters' backstories. My draenei pally was born on Draenor, my undead priest thinks that Sylvanas is leading the Forsaken into evil just as deeply as the Lich King would. My night elf rogue was one of Maiev Shadowsong's wardens who left the Barrow Dens to hunt Illidan ... but somehow got left behind when Maiev chased Illidan to Suramar. I didn't think that far ahead. But she has an unreasoning hero-worship for Maiev and an addiction to Endless Rage flasks (she's also an alchemist).
yarf Apr 9th 2010 11:56AM
You also don't need to play BY LEVEL.
Just because you're a level 56 Draenei Priest it doesn't mean your character couldn't have been at the Wrath Gate. However if you're not level 80 and want to participate in level 80 content lore, please actively level... nothing bugs other players more than seeing a level 58 death knight that was a commander of a DK battalion in Northrend... and four months later that same DK is still level 58.
Don't be a druid who's "Mastered forms" but prefers to stay feline, and thus have not leveled over 20, or even 16 if you prefer travel form.
And just because you're a druid doesn't mean you can SPEAK in animal form. -.-
Nothing bugs me more than seeing a feline speaking as if they were an elf/tauren. I think it takes more skill to convey a message through described body language than to just speak.
Irem Apr 9th 2010 1:36PM
To be fair, plenty of druid NPCs speak normally when they're in animal form. A druid who's gone slightly feral would probably be less likely to, but your average druid/shaman in ghost wolf form is still a humanoid assuming a different shape.
I do see plenty of druids running around in cat form actually RPing as cats, complete with purring, licking, nosing, meowing, and chasing anything shiny that moves. I will withhold my opinion on that, since it's impolite. :P
wllmsgame Apr 9th 2010 11:47AM
My Forsaken Warrior (when he gets around to RPing) was created around the idea of once being under Lord Garithos, and yes, even the humans under him thought he was an ass.
Its one of the reasons my forsaken is more sociable to the other races, all the other forsaken that just use and manipulate them reminds him of Garithos.
matthewburt Apr 9th 2010 11:55AM
@VSUReaper: Yeah, that's one thing I never understood, how is that Krasus, a consort, seems to be more powerful and wiser than the Aspect of Life? If Knaak had his way, Korialstrasz would be the Aspect and Alextrasza his mate.
I'm sorry, but it's the other way around. Just once I'd like Alexstrasza to go "STFU, Korial. I'm the aspect of LIFE. Get it? Now sit down, and shut up."
mariodcole Apr 9th 2010 12:14PM
And this reminds me why I don't read the licensed fic. I used to think Warcraft was a pretty good story but maybe the excellent gameplay put blinders on me and it really is a pretty mediocre story.
Oteo Apr 9th 2010 4:00PM
I love playing WoW, and attempt to RP in it, but I personally think it has a cheesy B-movie storyline:
"So, get this, the human's home world is invaded by orcs FROM ANOTHER PLANET, but the orcs aren't actually evil! They were just being controlled by demons... demons... FROM SPACE."
It seems really random sometimes x.x
Marita Apr 9th 2010 12:18PM
Over the year I've been playing wow, I never thought about my main (nelf priest) as a RP toon. She was just my main.
But as I've been reading about RP and making your character more "complete", I started thinking.
What is her story? I play in a PVP server, so no RP there.
And suddenly, I knew: She likes healing, because she is a priest (duh!) who grew up in Darnassus' temple. When she felt that life confined her to a passive way to worship Elune, she decided to leave her beloved temple, and start traveling, to help real people in the real world.
Sometimes she gets distracted by the secular world, but time to time she prefers to go back to her home, where she can rest and focus again in the important things: helping others.
Will Apr 9th 2010 1:06PM
that's why i'm looking forward to illidan's return with or without the burning legion. he's a martyr, he may be aligned or not with putress and the burning legion (cmon, lore-twists are cool), he may become a hero if he stands against wrynn (as saurfang should kill garrosh in a certain moment). ALSO, i like thrall and jaina's dumb lovestory, i'm not a lore pro, but that struggle with admiral proudmoore can create a new sanctuary city. i'm tripping balls here, you can vote this down.
SaintStryfe Apr 9th 2010 2:38PM
For my main's story, I (before I read it, unknownly) used the same plot-device as Golden's Rise of the Horde. My draenei character, born on Draenor to parents who wanted her as far from fighting as possible, was enchanted by orcs. She was hurt while observing them and got to live with them for several days. When she returned to her home, I mentioned that the Prophet might be interested in this, as he's desired greater contact with the Orcs since those two orc boys (in Golden's book, Grom and Durotan) had a similar experience in reverse. I used the connection of the healing salve that was used on her by the orcs to a healing salve she smelled on Nuboundo when he returned to Draenei society. This lead her to seek becoming a Shaman. I connected with the Lore figures for her race (Velen and Nuboundo) but never hijacked them.
Heather Apr 9th 2010 3:20PM
I had a friend who made a character, a Night Elf death knight, who had been a Night Elf Paladin in life and was BFFs with Uther Lightbringer
Ugh
Al Apr 10th 2010 12:06AM
"First – Tie the character to places or events instead of people."
This. Enough with the Sues, let's see some Zeligs.