Know Your Lore: High General Turalyon

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9-09-2010 @ 10:09AM

Dis said...

I'm not a writer and while I didn't notice any of those instance there was one part that got me

"...shattered during his last battle, and drove himself like wrath itself into the teeth of the orcs..."

the "himself" and "itself" being close like that made me do a double-take interrupting what was otherwise a great article. It would have been better, in my opinion, if at least one of those "-self"s was removed.

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