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11-17-2010 @ 2:50PM
Writing compelling romance is VERY hard to do and is almost impossible in the few min. that are available to a machinima film. Really people, it should be avoided unless it's VERY masterfully and subtly done. I'm afraid that the "story-line" here had me wincing, repeatedly. Again, I always have to give kudos when someone puts effort into something (and isn't obnoxious about it. That's my "out" for how I've treated gigi in the past) but I can't say a lot that is positive about this video. :( And advice from a story perspective: if you want to tackle love in your video, keep it simple and subtle. I'm all for seeing pairings that are unconventional. Heaven knows we need to see something other than Belf chick x EVERYONE, but you have to work hard to make it viable. Anyhoo... sorry I wrote too much. I was rooting for this video at the start so I just wanted to contribute something. :)Keep it up Romire.
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