World of WarCrafts: Blizzard fan fiction runner-up Meghan O'Hara
What is it that makes a Forsaken a Forsaken, and what keeps him from giving up and letting go? A few weeks ago, we interviewed 2010 Global Writing Contest runner up Celine Taillefer, whose story In the Blood told the tale of Blood Queen Lana'thel and her place in Icecrown Citadel. This week, we have a story of a different kind, one that explores the link between Scourge and Forsaken and what happens when that link is broken.
In the story Fresh, author Meghan O'Hara tells the chilling tale of once simple farmer Henry Walker and his development from mindless fiend of the Scourge armies to Forsaken priest. It's an eerie, well-written exploration into what exactly keeps an undead man sane and what drives him to continue waking up and moving on day after day. But beyond that, Fresh is an unlikely, strange and beautiful love story and a look into the interaction between the undead and the powers of the Light.

Meghan: I can barely believe I'm typing these words, but I'm a homeschooling housewife. That's a fairly recent development; I used to be a graphic artist. I actually did the old WoW webcomic Hammer of Grammar under my character's name, Auden. I'm married to Gweryc, the infamous melee hunter. I started playing WoW around Christmas 2005, just long enough to feel entitled to shake my staff at whippersnappers near the bank and croak about how back in my day, we had to run from the Crossroads to Thunder Bluff uphill, barefoot, and carrying a spore emulsion on a timer.
How did you get into writing?
I've loved to write for as long as I can remember. I noticed that Celine Taillefer copped to her Mary Sue Sailor Moon fic, so I guess I can admit that I wasted eighth grade filling something like 12 spiralbound notebooks with the epic saga of my friends and their torrid trysts with the New Kids on the Block.
Other than copywriting, all the writing I've done has been amateur. I had a bizarrely popular online journal for a decade or so but closed it under pressure from family and friends who were unhappy with the level of exposure it was getting. I've had a lot of uncomfortable conversations with my dad, but I don't think anything's ever going to top him finding out about my nether piercing from a client who read about it in Newsweek.
I have vast acres of fanfic online, although Fresh is the only Warcraft story I've written. Everyone keeps telling me to write original fiction and try to get published, but I secretly enjoy the challenge of working in someone else's universe. It suits my brain, which forgets my own phone number but can yank out minute details about Xander Harris at a moment's notice.

Wow, yes -– Ghostcrawler's post was exactly what inspired the story.
Once I read that, I couldn't help thinking about what could possibly drive a Forsaken to do that to themselves ... and to wonder what other effects it would have.Without spoiling too much, we can tell you that wielding the Light is a matter of having willpower or faith in one's own ability to do it. That's why there are evil paladins (for example, the Scarlet Crusade and Arthas before he took up Frostmourne). For the undead (and Forsaken), this requires such a great deal of willpower that it is exceedingly rare, especially since it is self-destructive. When undead channel the Light, it feels (to them) as if their entire bodies are being consumed in righteous fire. Forsaken healed by the Light (whether the healer is Forsaken or not) are effectively cauterized by the effect: sure, the wound is healed, but the healing effect is cripplingly painful. Thus, Forsaken priests are beings of unwavering willpower; Forsaken (and death knight) tanks suffer nobly when they have priest and paladin healers in the group; and Sir Zeliek REALLY hates himself.
Fresh is amazing -- and it really highlights the mind set behind a Forsaken. Can you tell us about why you chose that particular subject and about the development of the story?
Well first, thanks a lot, and I'm really glad you liked it! My first character ever was Forsaken, and in a lot of ways, the content in Fresh grew out of my experience playing her. When I bought WoW, I knew nothing about the universe, and I completely misunderstood what I'd heard about the Forsaken. Reading that they'd broken off from whoever this nasty "Arthas" person was, I assumed that meant they were good.
I adored the idea of noble, intelligent zombies, facing discrimination because of their appearance, fighting for their right to retain the homeland they'd had when they were alive. I've always been a sucker for an underdog story. It wasn't long before the quest content pimp-slapped me with how wrong I'd been. I'd had a working concept of my character as pretty decent overall, and there I was poisoning puppies and living in a city that considered "bloated corpses on hooks" a fetching window treatment.
To avoid re-rolling, I decided that my necromanced decaying organic matter was a beautiful, unique snowflake and basically good. Anything I came across in game that supported the idea that some Forsaken weren't evil -– their inclusion in the Argent Dawn, Leonid Barthalomew the Revered, the storylines of Trevor and High Inquisitor Fairbanks -– I researched for pleasure. Ghostcrawler's post was very relevant to my interests.

That was what really interested me -- the idea of John Q. Average having his insanely boring life interrupted by something so extraordinary.
Was Fresh created specifically for the global writing contest? How long did it take to complete?
Fresh was written specifically for the contest. The basic idea behind it had been kicking around in my head for a while, but (shameful confession time) I actually wrote the story in a dead heat the night the contest ended. I'd been so busy that I'd given up on entering at all, but Gweryc convinced me to at least give it a shot and swore he'd tank the children so I could concentrate. I guess it took me about eight hours. I finished and submitted about five minutes before the contest cutoff point, and only then had time to do a read-through. That was when I saw the gigantic plot hole and the hideous typos and was convinced that Metzen was going to use it for toilet paper.

Oh, wow, that's really tough. I guess I'd go with prehistory ... One of the most interesting parts for me of reading the War of the Ancients trilogy was the brief, tantalizing glimpses of the not-yet-dwarves Earthen and early tauren, and it seems like it'd be fun to explore.
Do you have any advice to aspiring entrants into the next Global Writing Contest?
Eight hours before the contest ends is not a good time to start, unless you like panic attacks.
Actually, I guess my biggest piece of advice would be to read as much supplemental material as possible. Wowpedia, the books, and at the risk of sounding like I'm brown-nosing, the Know Your Lore column here. Even if it doesn't give someone an awesome idea for a story or a cool piece of detail that makes their story seem more real, it just enhances the game so much.
Thank you so much for your time Meghan, and congratulations again on your win!
If you'd like to read the full version of Fresh, Meghan has made it available for public viewing on her Wordpress blog. For more excerpts from winning authors, you can check out the official Blizzard website with the list of winning stories.
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Reader Comments (Page 1 of 1)
Flarebear Apr 21st 2011 6:25PM
I really, really liked that story - and that comes from someone who had sworn off fanfiction of any type a few years ago. I was near tears at the end, and I thought the ending was fantastic.
Thanks for the chance to see inside such a fantastic writer's mind! :)
Adam Holisky Apr 21st 2011 6:45PM
testing
Destron Apr 21st 2011 7:14PM
This is a great story. I left a comment going into more detail on the story's site itself, but it really was quite excellent.
winterhawk Apr 21st 2011 7:09PM
Very nice story!
Thayer Apr 21st 2011 7:26PM
I just finished reading Fresh and I have to agree, it's an excellent story. The end had me in tears and it's now saved for reading again later. Please do write more. If this is what you can do in eight hours, I would pay to read what you can do with more time.
Paul Apr 21st 2011 7:29PM
I will definitely check it out, I haven't read much Warcraft fanfiction but I have wrote and read a nice bit of Buffy fanfiction. I used to enjoy reading fan fiction from the fanfiction.net website. I used to have a friend who would write some amazing Sailor Moon and other fanfiction. I really admire someone that can write within someone elses universe, yes the characters are already created but you have to stay true to them who people can tear you apart.
Anyways I look forward to reading it Meghan.
Deathknighty Apr 21st 2011 7:45PM
I just read the story, I think that might actually be the best short story I have ever read. Granted, I don't read that many of them, but that was outstanding.
Great job!
razion Apr 21st 2011 8:35PM
For a long time I felt like I've been missing something.
... No more. And you can't see it, but I'm saluting pretty darn hard right now.
e.friedman1992 Apr 21st 2011 10:00PM
I just have one question... I realize that this isn't official Blizz lore and she can do what she wants. But hasn't it been said MANY times that the Forsaken can't be brought back to the world of the living? It was proved when Alexstrasza herself couldn't save bridenbrand (I think that was his name.. Guy in Icecrown).
anyway. I absolutely love the story. and I even showed some of my non-WoW playing friends. I just had that one question.
Throm Apr 21st 2011 10:07PM
An undead being can only be brought back to true life through a miracle.
A miracle could be used to describe a Forsaken wielding the light in the first place, and it all went form there.
Dea ex Machina Apr 22nd 2011 1:38PM
Pssh. Clearly his player finally coughed up the 30$ for a faction transfer.
Auden Apr 21st 2011 11:47PM
It's funny you brought this up... I almost mentioned Crusader Bridenbrad myself in the interview, but I didn't want to risk ruining the surprise element in that scene for anyone who decided to read the actual story. I'm choosing my words very carefully right now in case anyone reads the comments before clicking through to the text.
I knew I was treading on the edges of canon with that part, and I was worried that "Fresh" would be disqualified because of it. I finally decided I'd rather be disqualified than give it up.
The thing is -- and maybe this is why the development team let it slide -- no one *is* brought back to true life.
"He raises one hand; the mottled gray-green skin is charred and black on his palms and fingertips."
I made sure to include that bit about the 'mottled gray-green skin' and him still having all his injuries to make it explicit that the Forsaken is still Undead... he's just had something very weird happen to him.
I wanted it left up to the reader to decide if this was a temporary effect, the first step in an ongoing process, or what.
Auden Apr 21st 2011 11:52PM
And also thanks to everyone who posted such nice comments. You completely made my day :)
Derleth Apr 22nd 2011 1:22AM
Wow great story. This is a great filler for the shadow priest lore hole that blizzard never seems to have really addressed.
L Apr 22nd 2011 3:00AM
I really loved this story. Beautiful writing. The descriptions especially.. the part where he remembered his wife.. took my breath away.
I recently became a mother and am struggling to keep up with my own writing (and WoW, when I can!).. the author has shown me that it can be done! She has inspired me very much. I hope that I can find more works by her. She has crazy amounts of talent.
Thank you for releasing this interview!
The Dewd Apr 22nd 2011 1:15PM
I used to love reading Hammer of Grammar and was very sad when it stopped updating. I can't wait to read "Fresh".
Fletcher Apr 23rd 2011 2:14AM
Great story! I can't wait until we finally get to raid Sylvanas for purples.
Hellwraith Feb 15th 2014 9:15AM
Amazing story... something so struggling is how I always pictured the Forsaken, in fact that's why I had my Frosaken character created. Auden, really amazing story.