Faction leader short stories continue with Sylvanas Windrunner

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9-27-2011 @ 7:29PM

Hollow Leviathan said...

The story ended better than it started, mostly because it started off with a lot of need for an editor. Hollow twice, half-remembered twice, and she backs away from the throne twice in a weird visual of backing away crouched, standing up, thinking for a bit, backing away again, stopping, slowly pivoting around, then walking to the edge. It's really strange.

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