Faction leader short stories continue with Sylvanas Windrunner

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9-28-2011 @ 11:36AM

Zhiva said...

Is Blizzard allergic to good writing?

# The great brown-skinned orc was festooned in his most menacing battle garb #

"Festooned"? Festooned in battle garb? _Festooned_ in his most _menacing_ battle garb?

# his veiny, tattooed biceps bursting out from beneath tusked shoulderguards. #
# Garrosh's backhand ripped through the sky, spraying the tent with a glistening arc of rainwater as it smashed into the side of Lydon's face. #

Is Blizzard allergic to non-purple prose?

# Although the wind here was biting cold, she felt only the dullest of aches. #

I thought that undead don't feel cold at all. And if she "felt only the dullest of aches", how does she know that it was biting cold? Also, you (author) said that already on the first page: "She could feel no cold, only a dull ache. "

And the writing gets even worse with every page.

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