Two Bosses Enter: Ishanah vs. Brann Bronzebeard

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12-12-2011 @ 3:30PM

Vorenos said...

Was McCurley having a seizure while writing this? I've never seen so many grammatical errors...

12-12-2011 @ 3:33PM

Caylynn said...

Well, aren't you the pleasant one?

12-12-2011 @ 3:44PM

Mathew McCurley said...

Are you serious? Because I just rechecked and I don't see anything glaring. So why don't you post examples instead of your dumb comments about me having a seizure?

Thank you for your input.

12-12-2011 @ 4:09PM

Al said...

There's "unless" instead of "unleash", but that's hardly seizure-worthy.

12-12-2011 @ 5:44PM

iangroenlund said...

Not cool, mate ... not cool ...

12-12-2011 @ 5:58PM

Ullaana said...

Well, Vorenos didn't need to make the seizure comment, but besides the "Unless" in place of "Unleash" there were a couple things that jumped out at me.

"Brann's wits, charms, and penchant for discover lead to many a comical outcome." Should probably be discovery instead of discover.

"there is little that can sway the vote in a contest than a lovable character.: Should have the word more between "little" and "that" or perhaps "contest" and "than".

And finally, Vorenos comment should not have been called dumb when either rude or derogatory are much better words.

12-12-2011 @ 8:15PM

mdspurrier said...

rude, derogatory, yet still dumb

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