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2-09-2012 @ 9:18PM
to be constructive basically what i'm saying is that I feel like the first two pages could have been combined and told the same story and 3 and 4 as well. Panels that are simply scenery are nice and what not but they are more artistic license. There is a ton of story based stuff to use that moves the story forward that I think could be put forward. The story is emotional, interesting, and I love the twist of having the father still alive..........I just kinda expect story progression with a weekly comic. Establishing context and setting is nice but not for a weekly web comic..........i don't want to wait a month to figure out what is going on. Hence why I'm ok with the current arc as a story overall but not as a weekly web comic.
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