Sep 9th 2010 10:09AM I'm not a writer and while I didn't notice any of those instance there was one part that got me
"...shattered during his last battle, and drove himself like wrath itself into the teeth of the orcs..."
the "himself" and "itself" being close like that made me do a double-take interrupting what was otherwise a great article. It would have been better, in my opinion, if at least one of those "-self"s was removed.
Sep 9th 2010 9:51AM It wasn't Turalyon's fault that Lothar charged just out of range.
Jun 2nd 2009 8:32PM "(gleezures, if you will)"
It was at this point that I scrolled up to see, sure enough, HIS name.
May 30th 2009 3:28PM The flag of a particularly fail failoc.
Apr 1st 2009 10:15AM "I'm sorry. I think I've killed her." creepiest/craziest part about it to me