May 11th 2008 12:10AM You do know that 5'9" is short for a blood elf?
Good description otherwise though, I find it's always a real help to have the wowwiki page for the race of the character I'm making open the whole time I make the desc. And it helps gives you some hooks and traits to liven things up too.
And since I critiqued:
Tarrok, like most Tauren, has a very muscular frame. From years of running the plains his legs are strong and he can run for hours without stopping for a breath. From the many battles defending himself and his clan from the centaur attacks his arms are thick and his hide is scarred in many places.
Dec 22nd 2007 3:36PM Comment
Dec 16th 2007 2:18PM Our ancestor's be praised that the gnomes aren't on our side!